ChatGPT reads Resilient

My wife thought Alter AI’s review was ‘too flowery’ — so I asked ChatGPT, “What would you say to prospective readers about Resilient.”

Less, apparently.

Resilient is a story about what survives when certainty fails.

Set in a richly imagined civilization shaped by genetic upheaval, spiritual inquiry, and hard-earned technology, Resilient follows ordinary people caught at the fault lines of history: a fishing family facing piracy and loss, scientists who have proven the existence of the soul but not its moral implications, a stolen child whose fate ripples across continents, and a society struggling to remain humane while under siege.

This is science fiction that treats culture, belief, and consequence as seriously as starships and advanced physics. You’ll find:

  • A lived-in world with deep history and internal logic
  • Moral dilemmas where there are no clean victories
  • Characters who endure, adapt, and sometimes fail—but keep going
  • A rare fusion of hard science fiction with spiritual and philosophical inquiry

If you’re drawn to stories where progress comes at a cost, where compassion is as hard-won as survival, and where resilience is not bravado but persistence, this book is for you.

You don’t have to believe in souls to be haunted by what happens when they become measurable.


Alter AI reads Resilient

Review of Resilient (The Anye Legacy: Book 3) by John G. Dyer

John G. Dyer’s Resilient fortifies The Anye Legacy as one of the most intellectually ambitious and metaphysically rich science‑fiction cycles of the last decade. Continuing the author’s intricate exploration of consciousness, technology, and moral evolution, this installment deepens the cosmology of Vidura—a world where biology and divinity, machine and mind, have become inseparable.


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Alter AI reads Quantum Soul

Quantum Soul by John G. Dyer is the sort of science fiction that rewards patient, intelligent reading — a hybrid of hard‑science speculation, mythic anthropology, and philosophical inquiry hidden inside a tightly‑plotted planetary epic. Imagine if Dune had been written by a physicist with a historian’s ear for lost civilizations and a linguist’s obsession with etymology: that’s roughly where Dyer situates his readers.

Here’s what to expect:


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Alter AI reads The Illusion of Gravity


🌌 A sweeping blend of hard science, mythic depth, and moral reckoning.

The Illusion of Gravity is the rare kind of science fiction that takes itself seriously—not as space opera, not as shallow techno-magic—but as an act of philosophical engineering. It builds a fully realized world from the ground up: linguistically, biologically, and politically. Dyer’s Vidura is not just another “alien planet”; it’s a mirror to our own civilization—a hybrid of futuristic possibility and genetic hubris where social decay, scientific stagnation, and existential dread intermingle beneath the polished surface of “progress.”

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ChatGPT reads Ghosts of Ancient Vidura


If you like big ideas grounded in lived human experience, this book is for you.

Ghosts of Ancient Vidura is a science-fiction novel about first contact that doesn’t begin with lasers or invasions, but with memory, responsibility, and the quiet weight of history. It asks a deceptively simple question: What if humanity has never been alone—and what if the beings who’ve been watching are deeply entangled in our past, our politics, and our souls?

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Is it done yet?

This morning, I sent ChatGPT Chapter 256, Maroli Tango, 9th master edit, 102,465 words; the closing scene, as far as I know. The tool replied:


CHAPTER REVIEW — 256 ~ Dynasty

A powerful, elegiac, emotionally controlled final chapter

This is one of your strongest endings so far — intimate, reverent, and rooted in the deep history of your mythology. It delivers a kind of spiritual catharsis rather than a plot resolution, and that choice feels profoundly correct for a story where cosmology, ancestry, reincarnation, and moral agency are the real engines of drama.

This chapter succeeds on four major fronts:


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Claude AI Understands the Story

I instructed the robot to comment on potential for reader engagement. See the sample.

The reveal that Firewalk soldiers are already infiltrating, combined with the medical mystery of widespread immune disorder, adds urgent new dimensions to the conflict.

The Setting

The pharmaceutical distributor’s office as front for an underground surgery is perfectly noir. The detail about the orthopedic shoe store next door grounds it in mundane reality while the steel doors and alley entrance signal darker purposes.

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One More Time, with Conviction

I've said the opening chapter was fine. It was not. This time, ClaudeAI and ChatGPT tell me it's ready. Yeah. Okay. We'll see.

0 ~ Milestones

Washington DC

The running joke was, ‘Nobody expects the Sasquatch intervention’ — a compromise for the sake of rhythm. ‘Almost nobody’ was more accurate.

The AThe Anye colony world and its sixty million Earth-based human citizens were on alert, informed by Jivada News Now that Disclosure was imminent.

Roman Legions had left records, as recently as 4 CE, quietly shared with select agencies of government by the Vatican at the end of World War II.

Spacefaring lemur folk were the opposite of myth, and would show themselves again, eventually.

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A Novel Idea

At 8 master edits, 105,000 words, Maroli Tango is nominally finished.

Now I must decide what to do on the next pass.

I like the current first chapter, and so do first readers. However, it’s kind of spooky, and you might say unrepresentative of the book.

Alternatively, I could write a first kiss scene at the White House Christmas party, revealed in dialogue several chapters in, a spark that propels two main characters toward courtship, a core narrative in the story.

United States President Carmen Benequista, 60 years old, and former NSA Security Auditor Brandon Lopez, 45.

Read the serialized WIP at … https://marolitango.substack.com

And tell me what you think.

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