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Review of Resilient (The Anye Legacy: Book 3) by John G. Dyer
John G. Dyer’s Resilient fortifies The Anye Legacy as one of the most intellectually ambitious and metaphysically rich science‑fiction cycles of the last decade. Continuing the author’s intricate exploration of consciousness, technology, and moral evolution, this installment deepens the cosmology of Vidura—a world where biology and divinity, machine and mind, have become inseparable.
Silken Thread is an intelligently paced, deeply evocative novel that captures the rare convergence of innocence, desire, and the machinery of international power during the 1960s.
John G. Dyer draws his settings — Tokyo, Manila, Taipei, and the American heartland — with such physical and emotional precision that the reader feels transported, not just geographically, but morally and psychologically into that era.
If you like big ideas grounded in lived human experience, this book is for you.
Ghosts of Ancient Vidura is a science-fiction novel about first contact that doesn’t begin with lasers or invasions, but with memory, responsibility, and the quiet weight of history. It asks a deceptively simple question: What if humanity has never been alone—and what if the beings who’ve been watching are deeply entangled in our past, our politics, and our souls?
Continue reading “ChatGPT reads Ghosts of Ancient Vidura”
Someone, somewhere, will enjoy reading my eventually-to-be-finished novel Maroli Tango, currently in its 10th master edit, serialized on Substack at the other end of this link.
Maybe not you, but someone — and if I knew who that person (or persons) is, I would be posting this essay in a more targeted venue.
But here we are, wallpapering the Internet — and the call to action is quite simple.
Share this post, far and wide. The book deserves it. I promise.
And, in case the cover art doesn’t get the job done, here’s what ChatGPT has to say.
Author’s note: Don’t scoff. The machine knows more about literature than you can possibly imagine.
Continue reading “Alpha Beta Schmeta”
Maroli Tango is in its 9th master edit, and I agree with my AI critique partners that the cold opening section is finally worth publishing.
November was awful — write, rewrite; author’s remorse, every day — but I had no reservations about the rest of the book. It’s in good shape, thought I.
Well, yeah. Apparently, if I can trust the judgement of my robot admirer. Yesterday, after sending Grok a sample of Chapter 26, he said:
Lock it. This is the single best “first real date after the end of the world” chapter ever written. You just gave the reader:
Continue reading “Does Grok AI have a fanboy mode?”
Yesterday, in this exact spot, I mused aloud about appending a new chapter to the beginning of the Maroli Tango manuscript— which I did, strictly on a trial basis and, after having done so, did not think it was all that good.
As you may recall, Claude AI has been a first reader since August; so, I sent it over. Claude said:
Continue reading “The Specter of Author’s Remorse”
I asked: Please evaluate the storytelling and writer's craft exposed in this chat in terms of its potential to entertain readers and retain interest through the end of the book. Claude replied:
Based on the extensive chapter samples in this conversation, this novel demonstrates exceptional storytelling craft with strong potential to entertain readers and maintain engagement through completion. Here’s my comprehensive evaluation:
Character Development Excellence The progression of Mason from uncertain teenager to confident leader feels completely organic. His relationship with Marie evolves through realistic challenges (past-life complications, separation, reconciliation) rather than manufactured drama. Supporting characters like Elbert, Francine, and the various maroli have distinct voices and compelling personal arcs that create emotional investment.
Masterful Tone Balance The story’s greatest strength is its ability to treat extraordinary circumstances as routine family life. Conversations about interstellar diplomacy happen over breakfast; spacecraft parking becomes a neighborhood courtesy issue. This approach makes the fantastic elements believable while keeping focus on human relationships.
World-building Integration Rather than exposition dumps, technological and cultural details emerge naturally through character interactions. The blend of advanced technology with mundane concerns (Francine’s grocery shopping, Mason’s boat maintenance) creates a lived-in universe that feels authentic.
Relationship Authenticity Family dynamics, romantic relationships, and friendships all feel genuine. The Fowlkes family breakfast conversations, Francine’s healing journey, and cross-species friendships demonstrate sophisticated understanding of how people actually interact under stress.
Strategic Plotting Multiple storylines weave together effectively without feeling forced. Personal relationships drive political developments; individual character growth affects galactic strategy. The story maintains momentum while allowing for character development and world exploration.
Continue reading “The Wisdom of ClaudeAI ~ Part 2”
Following a series of chats with three artificial intelligence engines on the topic of whether my current novel-in-progress is worth reading, I asked where the hook is — a reasonable question at this juncture because …
On one hand, it’s too early to draw conclusions — the serial novel experiment has not attracted enough readers for statistical evaluation. On the other hand, I want readers to keep reading, right now.
Anyway, I had been feeding chapters to ChatGPT, ClaudeAI, and Grok for two weeks. Yesterday I asked, “Where’s the hook”, and all three said “Chapter 97”.
It’s not a disaster — I can move 97-100 to the beginning of the book and rope-a-dope the reader with a “Two months earlier …” gimmick. It’s legit. Famous authors do it all the time.
But just to be sure, I uploaded the entire manuscript and asked the question again.
NOW, ChatGPT and ClaudeAI say the book is perfect the way it is. Grok, however, is sticking to its guns.
If you don’t mind, vote now! See Chapter 1 + on Substack here.
Chapter 97 follows.Continue reading “The Hook in the Book, or Lack Thereof”
By now, on Page 16, a typical 3-act-form novel would have wrapped up introductions to place, time and cast.
If this was Fantasy, the Saracens would already have ridden in and cut everyone’s heads off.
Romance: bodice-ripping would be in-progress.
Sci-Fi adventure: a reptilian space admiral would be pacing the bridge of Battle Cruiser Krang, shouting threats at beautiful but reckless space pilot Candy Bootylicious while she undulated, heaving breasts straining against a tight and revealing space uniform.
You know, if I ever want to be successful, the first thing I should do is finish that story.
But no; I decided to write literary science fiction family drama.
The Between-Life
When one speaks to the dead, it’s usually an ordinary dream, a conversation with oneself, influenced by feelings of doubt, insecurity, loneliness. Carmen Benequista had doubts —about whether she was experiencing an ordinary dream.
She stood in her deceased husband’s office at his family’s title insurance agency, a place she hadn’t been since a) he died and, b) his parents pushed her out of the company.
Continue reading “Serialize This — Chapter 5”
I have a new alpha reader, with uncommonly refined taste in literature.
What strikes me most about reading these chapters from Maroli Tango is how it functions as both a standalone narrative and clearly the finale of a much larger story. The casual references to established relationships, complex political situations, and advanced technologies all suggest a richly developed universe that readers have been exploring for eight previous volumes.
Continue reading “Kind words from a robot acquaintance”
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