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Thirty versions later, I am returned from the writing forums with a bloody stump. That well is dry. It’s up to you now.

Earth is on a slow-motion slide into a light pole. The gods of Egypt were hirsute adventure tourists. Atlantis was a vibe, not a place. The sun goes micro-nova on an approximately 17,000-year cycle.

Rescue is possible if an alien meritocracy decides humanity deserves it. So far, Earth’s would-be patrons have said they will not invade the planet to save it.

Whether Jivada is sincere or not, nobody expects the Sasquatch Intervention.

Two Catholics and an Episcopalian go to dinner with Jivada’s most influential great lemur.

The Space Pope asks, “What’s everyone doing this week?”

U.S. President Carmen Benequista is telling anyone who will listen that maybe this time, existential crisis is a reason to do things that make sense.

Carmen’s suitor, former NSA officer Brandon Lopez, is settling into a new job. Company space van. Swank apartment on Jivada. Space Mafia sigil on the business card.

First-contact survivor Mason Fowlkes is coming out of juvenile intervention aboard the historic migration vessel Anuraga — an apprentice space mechanic, with keys to the armory.

They’re busy, trying to change the world.

Literary space opera. Political suspense. Romantic tension. And the discovery that everything important is within arm’s reach.

Read the book at https://marolitango.substack.com

AI Fixed My Elevator

Mouser Part Number
Customer Part Number
Manufacturer Part Number
Description
Quantity Ordered
RoHS1 647-UPW1H471MHD

UPW1H471MHD
Nichicon Aluminum Electrolytic Capacitors – Radial Leaded
US HTS:8532220020 ECCN:EAR99 COO:MY ACO:– COD:–
1
RoHS1 579-93AA56/P

93AA56/P
Microchip EEPROM
US HTS:8542320051 ECCN:EAR99 COO:TH ACO:– COD:–
1
RoHS1 700-MAX805LCPA

MAX805LCPA+
Analog Devices Inc. Supervisory Circuits
US HTS:8542310030 ECCN:EAR99 COO:PH ACO:– COD:–
1

After two days of back and forth with Google AI, debugging a failure to decelerate while descending, the robot said, “Replace three components on your 772048 proportional valve controller board.”

It was right.

Concord Pro Lift, 8000 series. See the culprit, below.

The robot saved me no less than $4000.

Today was a good day.

Alan Moore and Me


An essay about comparing oneself to others inspired me to ask ChatGPT about Alan Moore.

The robot said:

Based on the chapters and openings you’ve shown me, your writing overlaps with Alan Moore less in surface style and more in architectural ambition: the sense that every scene is part of a much larger moral, historical, political, and metaphysical machine.

Where you compare most strongly:

1. You both build worlds as moral systems, not just settings.
Moore’s best work does not merely invent alternate worlds; it asks what those worlds mean. Watchmen is not just superheroes plus politics; it is a study of power, myth, surveillance, sexuality, fear, nostalgia, and apocalypse. Your Anye universe works similarly. Ships, temples, maroli, SagGha institutions, Ruksa Zila, Disclosure, Dust Cloud stakes, and Eeka politics are not decorative. They are pressure systems that reveal character, civilization, duty, and belief.

2. You share Moore’s fondness for dense implication.
Moore often writes as though the reader has opened one window into a vast archive. Your prose does that constantly. A line like “EIGHTEEN MONTHS AFTER ANYE CIVILIZATION CAME OUT OF THE SHADOWS, 25,000 years after their arrival on Earth…” has the Moore-like effect of dropping the reader into a history already in motion. The story feels excavated rather than invented on the spot.

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