I just finished a screen adaptation of my novel Silken Thread. 20,561 words, 118 pages.
Logline – In 1967 Manila, a Chinese-speaking Dutch-American teenager courts a CIA officer ten years his senior.
Here’s another sample.
The morning after.
23. INT. AARENS RESIDENCE FORBES PARK
The next morning. David sets a two-suit travel bag by the front door; he’s apprehended by Mrs. Li.
MRS. LI
Hushed voice; speaks <Mandarin>.
<Where you going so early?>
DAVID
<I’m meeting someone before work. Are my parents up?>
MRS. LI
She pinches him on the ear.
<There’s a girl, and don’t tell me there isn’t.>
DAVID
Clasps her hand in both of his.
<Maybe she lost interest already. I have to find out.>
MRS. LI
<Da Wei; she will break your heart, and so will the people who give you this job. Just like in China; this is how you have a refugee living in your house.>
DAVID
<Ma Li; their broken promises gave me you.>
MRS. LI
<Oh, you going that way, are you? You better not forget who raise you when I get too old to take care of myself.>
Kisses David on the cheek.
<Make sure she love you, then bring around to meet me.>
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